http://www.gospeltranslations.org/w/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3ABrothers%2C_Consider_Christian_Hedonism%2Fes 2026-04-04T06:57:18Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.16alpha http://www.gospeltranslations.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Brothers,_Consider_Christian_Hedonism/es&diff=3573&oldid=prev 2008-03-02T19:36:22Z

<p>New page: Once again, I truly enjoyed proof-reading the above mentioned article.&nbsp; I believe that the translator, Gilda Fabozzi, did an excellent job in capturing the essence of this article. ...</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>Once again, I truly enjoyed proof-reading the above mentioned article.&amp;nbsp; <br /> <br /> I believe that the translator, Gilda Fabozzi, did an excellent job in capturing the essence of this article.<br /> <br /> The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but nevertheless I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.<br /> <br /> I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per paragraph number.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Paragraph #2 =&amp;gt; change &quot;los&quot; to '''&quot;les&quot;''' in the first line.<br /> <br /> Paragraph #5 =&amp;gt; change &quot;eso&quot; to '''&quot;esto&quot;'''.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The article refers to &quot;this&quot; which translates to &quot;esto&quot;.<br /> <br /> Paragraph #6 =&amp;gt; change &quot;remplazar&quot; to'''&quot;re-emplazar&quot;'''.<br /> <br /> &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; change .......&quot;según los beneficios que intentemos obtener de ella&quot; <br /> <br /> &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; to ......'''&quot;según intentemos obtener beneficios de ella&quot;'''<br /> <br /> Paragraph #7 =&amp;gt; change &quot;lo expresó así&quot; to '''&quot;'''lo expresó'''de la siguiente manera&quot;.'''<br /> <br /> ''''''Paragraph #16 =&amp;gt; change (&quot;no esperando nada a cambio&quot;) to (&quot;no '''esperes''' nada a cambio&quot;).<br /> <br /> Paragraph #27 =&amp;gt; Last line in the paragraph =&amp;gt; change &quot;fortalezala&quot; to &quot;f'''ortaleza'''&quot;.<br /> <br /> Paragraph #28 =&amp;gt; First line in the paragraph =&amp;gt; change &quot;sacerdocio&quot; to &quot;'''ministerio'''&quot;.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> My following comments are not related to the translation to Spanish, per say:<br /> <br /> Paragraph #1 =&amp;gt;&amp;nbsp; Reference to &quot;Lucas 21:16&quot; not exactly stated as per LBLA.<br /> <br /> Paragraph #10 =&amp;gt; Couldn't see the relation between these references and the paragraph (Juan 8:34; Romanos 6:16; 2 Pedro 2:19).<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> P.S.&amp;nbsp; Thanks Charissa for the link to the instructions on how to convert my keyboard to Spanish.&amp;nbsp; :-)<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> In Chirst's Love,<br /> <br /> Marina.</div>

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